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Thank you @chiaramig – this is excellent. (I personally love what you say about English being a means of communication…)
The writing is super – we just need to tidy up a few things:
➡️ an excellent knowledge of English is something that makes your c.v. standing out “to make something stand out” > an excellent knowledge of English is something that makes your c.v. STAND out
to access something (no preposition) whereas, you need a preposition if you use ‘give’: to GIVE access To
> … not only is it an opportunity to access a more successful career
to get in contact to > to get in contact WITH
this phrase needs a bit of change to the word order: My opinion is, that what is bad it’s the attitude to make feeling left out those who are not good at English or are not keen on study it.
> My opinion is, that what is bad IS the attitude THAT makeS THOSE who are not good at English or are not keen on studING it FEEL LEFT OUT.
(⚠️ keen on +ING)
Well done Chiara 🌸