Reply To: Television as a reflexion of today’s society.

[Kerin]

It is so true – normal is not enough anymore (this depresses me so much!) I am nostalgic for old TV shows that were just … normal!

Furthermore, I fear that the media is insular in most places in the world. Often I will bring up something I’ve read to my mother (who lives in the UK) and she is oblivious to it. The British press are becoming more and more insular and I worry that it will worsen with Brexit … anyway, I digress!

Excellent piece of writing @justine.maebe – logical, with clear progression using linking phrases, rich vocabulary and the grammar constructions are sound. Well done 👍

Here are my notes for you. Just message me if you have any questions or need any clarifications:

> spelling: Television is a reflection of today’s society

> lexical suggestion – replace welcomes: It can create a wonderful virtual world that allows and invites you to relax

> Suggest deleting or replacing ‘very’ – At the same time it’s also a powerful medium (or) an extremely powerful medium that can influence the consumer.

You might like this post! https://hub.englishdigitalacademy.com/quick-win-5-powerful-adjectives-in-english/

> probably just a typo!: by the end of the evening you’ve spend ⚠️- spent

> In result ⚠️ watching television becomes less expensive – As a result watching television becomes less expensive

Excellent work Justine. Keep it up!