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Make a decision
Choose to a make a sport: is it better for me to go swimming or to go skating?
I personally don’t like swimming pool in winter, since I suffer from cold and I don’t like to go under water (personal observation).
According to my boyfriend, it would be helpful for me to overcome my fear (report from another source).
I’m not totally convinced that at, my own age, this could be possible anymore (express doubt).
On the contrary, I used to skate when I was young and I’ve always found it very funny.
Moreover, I’m fully confident that everyone should try it, at least once in a lifetime, since, also after a probable difficult start, it is so thrilling for everyone, anyway (be persuasive).
I’m totally convinced that, after all that year of inactivity, it will be tough also for me; however, I think it will be worth trying (try to avoid being negative).
The pitfall could be to break a leg, but I don’t want to think this could happen, anyway, wearing safety equipment (dismess an obstacle).
I feel more confident on my skates than underwater (state an advantage).
What do you think? Have I already taken my decision?
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Hi Manuela,
Well done! I’ve shared a document with you on Google Drive.
I’m also sharing this:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_59ETY9qr8fKn9_TUr9SRTxT4M7I6l50Rf6fUhieL6M/edit?usp=sharing
It’s a writing correction code. I’ve marked your writing using the code.
This is a way for you try and work out the corrections on your own. Then, obviously if there are things you can’t fix, I’ll help you!
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