[Kerin]

Hi Andrea,

I’m not able to see your upload. Could you maybe send it to me by email?

Thanks!

[Kerin]

This is really well written Lucia, well done. There are a few mistakes, but not many. I’ve sent you the corrections in a Google doc

[Kerin]

Thanks Lucia! Nice to read. I’ve shared a google doc with you for corrections

[Kerin]

👏👏👏👏👏👏

Excellent phrases Lucia!!!

ps- on the cards (with ‘s’)

[Kerin]

Great job Lucia. (I’m late too! Sorry, I missed this!)

Just this> THE CAUSE OF IT IS PROBABLY THAT I DON’T CONSIDER that the FASHION INDUSTRY is one THAT HAS INFLUENCE ON MY LIFE,

[Kerin]

Well summarised Jennifer. Here are a few notes:

> center is the US spelling, which is fine to use, but in writing if you choose to use American English, you must use it consistently. Just something to be aware of!

Suggest instead of: As the major advantage the infraestructure is already there and …

> The major advantages are that the infrastructure is already there and ….

> spelling constrains ❌ = constraints ✅

Good job 👍

[Kerin]

Interesting perspective Susanna. We will discuss!

Vocabulary is excellent

Can you try and fix these?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_59ETY9qr8fKn9_TUr9SRTxT4M7I6l50Rf6fUhieL6M/edit

> I think , at least once in a lifetime , we were in a situation when we regretted saying something. (WT)

> As a child I was raised in the environment when an independent thinking was very much encouraged. (WW)

> Regardless of how revolutionary or radical were my ideas (WO)

> Little did I know that the adulthood (delete ‘the’)

> affect your relationship with the colleagues (delete ‘the’)

[Kerin]

Well written Anna-Maria.

Some suggestions:

> Instead of to construct a brand image, we say to build a brand image

> However, Luca still doubts that their budget probably doesn’t stretch that far. Because we are using ‘doubt’ it is a sort of prediction, so the future tense sounds more natural here. Also we wouldn’t use the double negative:

However, Luca still doubts that their budget will stretch that far.

> To Lucas’s doubts I suggest: In answer to Lucas’s doubts

> This isn’t wrong: … before it’s too trendy and expensive. If you add ‘gets‘ it sounds even better: … before it gets too trendy and expensive.

Let me know if you need any clarifications! 🤗

[Kerin]

Go here for corrections Lucia: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WiPKgH3nTA5pVFb2MewksGmZnkIGicHu7sC1nioH53I/edit?usp=sharing

[Kerin]

Good Carlos, well written!

Let’s see if we can iron out some errors:

> I do agree in the fact that this is a mania > wrong preposition

> …. since a large amount of population has a good understanding of this language. > missing an article

> In my opinion, provided that lots of people know a concrete language, global communication would be at ease. I suggest: would be easier? Be at ease means to feel calm and relaxed

Have a go and see if you can fix the above

[Kerin]

🙏 You’re very welcome!

[Kerin]

Thanks for sharing Gloria. I hope you are no longer ashamed of your accent, but I completely understand how you may have felt intimidated, especially at the beginning.

> Top points for your use of vocabulary esp. discriminated against and looked down on – good job.

I suggest this tweak to your last sentence:

Not sure if this is the case for everyone but in Latin groups, it is very likely that you will be discriminated against when speaking in English. or … it is very likely that one will be discriminated against when speaking in English.

[Kerin]

Beautifully put Susanna!

[Kerin]

Super! 😊

[Kerin]

Your articles are my pronomi diretti e indiretti 😂