Top marks on this Andrea, well done:

✅ you used your own words

✅ you identified the main idea

✅ you found relevant ideas & omitted irrelevant details

✅ you kept the meaning the same

✅ you used attributive tags

✅ you kept your opinion out of it

Let’s have a look at some corrections:

The main point the author makes is that “Made in Italy” labels continue to develop their businesses successfully, DESPITE the rising low-cost manufacturers from the Asian market and the RECENT economic crises.

despite v although – see this link to understand the difference

https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/grammar/b1-b2-grammar/in-spite-of-despite-although-even-though-and-though

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This manifacture is based on the exploiting of work conditions to optimise the profits. ❌

This manufacturing is based on exploiting the work conditions to optimise the profits. ✅

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To conclude, the author emphasises that can’t continue to exist these painpoints between such gorgeous products and their production processes.❌

WORD ORDER: To conclude, the author emphasises that these painpoints can’t continue to exist between such gorgeous products and their production processes.✅

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