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Well done on this task Mónica. I agree with what you say about images and how it could be used as a tool for good instead of ‘evil’!
Your essay is well structured, coherent and fluid. You’ve used some nice vocab in there too:
Notes:
1> The main uses of television are depending on age …. here you should use the present simple: The main uses of television depends on age … (because this is an opinion/fact. It’s not about time)
2> contents – content is usually uncountable (I like this page as it gives a quick summary of the grammar and it has a nice word list) https://ieltsliz.com/uncountable-nouns-word-list/
Suggestions:
Another way to say low/high intellectual level – less/more cultured/educated. Low intellectual level – ignorant, uneducated, unread, uncultivated
