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Hey @Lu_Corde , this is fab work! Well done on the new vocab use. Please review my corrections and suggestions below. Give me a shout if you need clarification on anything. đź‘Ť
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during this class the groups for the project WERE BEING decided and she didn’t want to be forced to share her efforts with some GORMLESS student. Entering (DELETE:in) (or Going into – more natural!) the laboratory she saw that people WERE already divided into groups and so she went toward the teacher, PUTTING ON a smile.
“Hello, I am sorry I’M SO late. Are the groups made UP yet?” The professor GOT THE HUMP: she clearly thought to have finished the difficult business OF ORGANISING so many different people. “Hello Miss. WITHOUT A SHADOW OF A DOUBT you have a very good reason to be late. In any case, you can join (DELETE:the) group c. THERE ARE ONLY TWO OF THEM, can you see them? There, in the second row.”
I followed the direction SHE WAS POINTING IN and it was like to be GOTTEN RUN OVER. The group she was indicating was MADE UP OF a boy and a girl. He was a pretty boy and she knew him well enough to know that he WASN’T THE BRIGHTEST CRAYON IN THE BOX and the girl… Well, the girl was her ex-girlfriend. Jack really HAD PUT HER OUT, THIS WAS GOING TO BE a long and difficult project.
