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Well done Sandra:
✅ you used your own words
✅ you identified the main idea
✅ you found relevant ideas & omitted irrelevant details
✅ you kept the meaning the same
✅ you used attributive tags
✅ you kept your opinion out of it
Let’s have a look at some corrections:
> Italy has coped with many crisis – you can either say
Italy has coped with many A crisis or Italy has coped with many crises
I suggest this change to make the first paragraph more fluid:
In “Made in Italy”: What is behind the Worldwide Famous Label?, Annalisa Girardi, journalist, says that the label still enjoys great popularity and attracts sophisticated customers wordwide. Gucci, for example, ranks first followed by (delete ‘the) other luxury brands.
Yet, Italy has coped with many crises in the past including the low-cost producers in Asia.
