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Hi Filiz,
Again, good effort.
I suggest making these changes:
> Regarding the on-time delivery reporting, I understood that I would receive the report by the end of this week. By adding the hyphen and the comma, it makes it clearer.
> I was wondering if you could finish the work on time or if you might need extra time.
Apart from that, good work!