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  • Writing Task 2 – Diplomatic English – Feedback

    Posted by Filiz on January 28, 2024 at 9:55 pm

    Dear Teresa,

    Regarding on time delivery reporting you would prepare, I understood that I would receive the report by the end of this week. There seems to be a delay here. I was wondering if you could finish work on it or if you might need extra time. I am happy to review your workload and to do list so that we can prioritize the report. Please let me know if you need any further support from me. On another note, I would appreciate it if you would communicate any delay earlier than the deadline.

    Kind Regards

    Filiz

    Kerin replied 2 months, 3 weeks ago 2 Members · 1 Reply
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  • Kerin

    Administrator
    January 31, 2024 at 3:34 pm

    Hi Filiz,

    Again, good effort.

    I suggest making these changes:

    > Regarding the on-time delivery reporting, I understood that I would receive the report by the end of this week. By adding the hyphen and the comma, it makes it clearer.

    > I was wondering if you could finish the work on time or if you might need extra time.

    Apart from that, good work!

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