• Journalist Owen Jones

  Story from Journalist Owen

  Posted by Mao on November 2, 2020 at 10:55 am

  On his 35th birthday, he went to a night cap (I don’t know if I correctly listened to the word) with his friends. All of a sudden, he and his friends attacked by a group of young guys who were drunk.

  He was knocked down by them and about to be dragged while his friends tried to fight against them and were punched.

  After policed had come, everything was settled down.

  Kerin replied 4 years ago 2 Members · 1 Reply
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  Kerin

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  November 4, 2020 at 9:29 am

  You got it @mao!

  Please have a look at the changes I’ve made. Let me know if you don’t understand anything (the last sentence is the grammar we look at in module 6)

  On his 35th birthday, he went to FOR A night-cap (I don’t know if I correctly listened to the word – yes: it means a hot or alcoholic drink taken before bedtime) with his friends. All of a sudden, he and his friends WERE attacked by a group of young guys who were drunk.

  He was knocked down by them and about to be dragged AWAY while his friends tried to fight against them and were punched.

  After THE POLICE CAME, everything (DELETE:was) settled down.

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