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OMG @rubina this is crazy! ….Yet somehow I can imagine you 😂
Love these adventures that go so wrong, but turn out to be better than expected.
Have a look at the corrections. I’ve marked it using the writing code.
This is a way for you to try and work out the corrections on your own. Then, obviously if there are things you can’t fix, I’ll help you!
Here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_59ETY9qr8fKn9_TUr9SRTxT4M7I6l50Rf6fUhieL6M/edit
Notes:
> Title should be: The most thrilling experience I ever had … so far!
See here for info: https://hub.englishdigitalacademy.com/forums/topic/until-now-or-so-far/
> We would have seen wild whales – this is a conditional phrase and the meaning is we were planning to see whales, but we didn’t. In this case, you have to use this form:
we were going to see wild whales
this form shows that something was about to happen
