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[Kerin]

@altedua congratulations on this piece of writing! The vocabulary use is excellent and it’s written so naturally, it is 100% relatable and amusing to read. Brava 👏👏👏

Have a look at the corrections using the writing code and have another go at a second draft. If you can’t figure out anything please just ask (there are some tough grammar points in there) But have a go anyway!

*1 – should read like this: I just can’t get my head around (DELETE: it) how this could have happened to me!

*2 – you can either say: a lot of OR lots of (same meaning!)