[Kerin]

You see where I have marked red: she has been and perpetrate? Can you try and fix the grammar?

The same here:

[Kerin]

Oh wow @Rubina, I find this painting super creepy! I love the history behind it – excellent job with your critique.

Let’s have a look at some corrections:

[Kerin]

I hope this prediction is wrong – it makes me think of a cold world!

Note:

A lot of professions, SUCH as lawyers, …..

(We can use such as to introduce an example or examples of something we mention)

or more informal:

A lot of professions, LIKE lawyers, …..

This is a really nice exercise to show the difference between ‘as’ and ‘like’

https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/grammar/intermediate-to-upper-intermediate/as-and-like

[Kerin]

Totally agree. I was having problems with my computer (I bought it in 2016) and the guy in the shop told me – it’s vintage software 😱….. Vintage? It’s only 4 years old 🤔

Note:

maybe is one word

Here you could also use the future: Maybe it’ll take more time (to indicate a future prediction) 👍

[Kerin]

Yes, I wasn’t so young, but still could not have imagined. I didn’t even use a mobile phone in 1998… and I’m not even sure I had an email.

[Kerin]

👍😉

(yes, for example: “I flew home yesterday. Utterly sad to be leaving.”)

[Kerin]

@chiaramig 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 LOVE it! (…….and sooooooo my life!)

[Kerin]

@Carly this is beautifully written and I love what you say about the colours and the sense of brutality and horror.

notes:

>There´s is chaoes everywhere and so was there after the bombing > i suggest this order to make it sound more natural: There is chaos everywhere, just as there was after the bombing. Or, Just as there was after the bombing, there is chaos everywhere.

>thought provling (probably a typo!) – thought provoking

> I like this sentence: Looking at this painting I feel moved, thoughtful , a little annoyed and totally sad. Just for practice, can you come up with any synonyms for ‘totally sad’? 🌸

[Kerin]

great!

[Kerin]

I agree with you Paolo! We should always have a choice.

Note:

-DependS on which conteXt.

-spelling: chose – choose

[Kerin]

Yes, agree!

Note: No, I didn’t think IT

[Kerin]

Thank you Paolo. I think you make a good point there.

Notes:

In my opinion is that the author’s predictions could be fantastic , but I think that ( DELETE: the) men could lose the (Spelling)FANTASY and (Creative is an adjective. The noun is: ) CREATIVITY …. but mostly TO BE free of MAKING (DELETE: the) mistakeS and after improve THEMSELVES FOR THE better.

[Kerin]

Well done on this task Mónica. I agree with what you say about images and how it could be used as a tool for good instead of ‘evil’!

Your essay is well structured, coherent and fluid. You’ve used some nice vocab in there too:

Notes:

1> The main uses of television are depending on age …. here you should use the present simple: The main uses of television depends on age … (because this is an opinion/fact. It’s not about time)

2> contents – content is usually uncountable (I like this page as it gives a quick summary of the grammar and it has a nice word list) https://ieltsliz.com/uncountable-nouns-word-list/

Suggestions:

Another way to say low/high intellectual level – less/more cultured/educated. Low intellectual level – ignorant, uneducated, unread, uncultivated

[Kerin]

😂😂😂

[Kerin]

That is certainly a winning attitude @Yulia 👏