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  • Kerin

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    July 14, 2021 at 11:32 am in reply to: Activation Project

    Nice work @Manuela.Lelli

    There are a few tweaks to make:

    no.3 What you’ve written isn’t grammatically wrong. However, we would tend to just use the past simple in this situation: Sorry, I didn’t catch what you said

    no.4 you are missing an ‘it’ – can you try and figure out where it should go?

    no.6 perfect!

    no.7 Similar to no.3. It sounds more natural to use the pst simple. Can you rewrite using past simple?

    Thanks! ☺

  • Kerin

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    July 9, 2021 at 9:40 am in reply to: What does your company do?

    @davide πŸ‘ nice sentence!

    To make it even stronger, you could also add the problem your company solves or the goal your clients want to reach:

    Sintra Consulting srl creates and sells digital solutions with the purpose to lead customers through their digital transformation so that they can ….

  • Kerin

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    July 7, 2021 at 9:24 am in reply to: What does your company do?

    Hi @Gianni.Bianchi this is good: clear and concise πŸ‘

    A tweak to make:

    Sintra – Digital Business offers digital transformation services for companies SUCH AS B2B platformS, ecommerce and support for digital strategy

    To make it even stronger, you could also add the problem your company solves or the goal your clients want to reach: Sintra – Digital Business offers digital transformation services for companies such as B2B platforms, ecommerce and support for digital strategy so that they can …..

  • Kerin

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    July 5, 2021 at 3:30 pm in reply to: 5 sentence about me

    Nice to meet you @Jessica.Caneschi

    I would like to live near the sea too!

    Some notes:

    > a town in Tuscany (we don’t use ‘the’ for cities or regions)

    > I have been working in Sintra FOR 7 years

    > I usually do sport 3 timeS a week

    πŸ‘Œ

  • Kerin

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    July 2, 2021 at 10:59 am in reply to: AP 8 – Company Meeting

    Me too! It is totally my sense of humour!

    This is exactly what I wanted you to do. πŸ‘

    The last phrase > ME: Sorry Adam, we should do what to her? (with the intonation on ‘what’)

    Good Lucia!

  • Kerin

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    July 2, 2021 at 10:56 am in reply to: AP 8 – What would you say?

    Good work here @Lu_Corde

    Here are some suggestions:

    4. Instead of Sorry a piece of clarification … better> Sorry, just to clarify …

    5. You should use a phrasal verb here: You are using a word that I’m not making out,

    7. Can you try and rewrite this?! 😚

    8. …. after having picked up Jenny?

  • Kerin

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    July 2, 2021 at 10:51 am in reply to: AP 8 – Checkout list

    Good sensible strategies @Lu_Corde πŸ‘Œ

  • Kerin

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    June 30, 2021 at 9:45 am in reply to: My connection with tv series

    I am very similar to you I believe!

    Just one note:

    > but the most important requisites to resist (delete:to) boredom are;

    ps. You must try Better Things – I think it is pure dead brilliant and I think you’d like it!

  • Kerin

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    June 28, 2021 at 9:55 am in reply to: successful conversations

    Hi @rubina

    Great πŸ‘

    A few tweaks to make:

    2. Would instead of could

    6. cheating ON her (to cheat on someone)

    8. spelling > then βœ… Jenny

    πŸ€—

  • Kerin

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    June 28, 2021 at 9:48 am in reply to: 5 facts about me

    Nice to meet you Francesco!

    I like your philosophy (especially points 3 and 5 – I can relateπŸ˜‚)

    English is good πŸ‘ In fact 1, delete ‘the’ before Sintra. We don’t use ‘the’ in front of names

    > I work for an IT company, sintra digital business, based in Arezzo. βœ…

    > French and English need a capital letter

    > I when used as the pronoun should always have a capital letter too: I’m trying, I don’t like etc

    πŸ€—

  • Kerin

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    June 23, 2021 at 9:25 am in reply to: My Perfect Weekend

    That sounds like a pretty awesome weekend @Riccardo.Gai

    Good job! πŸ’ͺ

    Please see the corrections and just ask if you need clarification

    > AT the weekend i usually prefer CYCLING, because it takes more time than a run.

    > Instead IN the afternoon, i would stay in, TO relax reading a book, watching Netflix.

  • Kerin

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    July 12, 2021 at 9:47 am in reply to: What does your company do?

    Nice @Gianni.Bianchi – much stronger πŸ‘

  • Kerin

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    July 12, 2021 at 9:45 am in reply to: What does your company do?

    Great! Much stronger @Davide.Mattesini πŸ‘

  • Kerin

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    July 7, 2021 at 9:14 am in reply to: AP 8 – What would you say?

    Ok @Lu_Corde , let’s see:

    In your original sentence you wrote:

    > Sorry, how much sales increase we need?

    you are simply missing the auxiliary verb: Sorry, how much sales increase DO we need?

    In the corrected sentence you are almost there, you are just missing the preposition which you could place here

    > Sorry, how much do we need to increase sales BY?

    or here

    > Sorry, BY how much do we need to increase sales?

    Lastly, you could simply say: Sorry, how much?

    πŸ™‚

  • Kerin

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    July 7, 2021 at 9:10 am in reply to: AP 8 – Checkout list

    Oh man! I can imagine it was pretty embarrassing, but good for you for taking a stand!

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