[Kerin]

Hi @Gianni.Bianchi this is good: clear and concise 👍

A tweak to make:

Sintra – Digital Business offers digital transformation services for companies SUCH AS B2B platformS, ecommerce and support for digital strategy

To make it even stronger, you could also add the problem your company solves or the goal your clients want to reach: Sintra – Digital Business offers digital transformation services for companies such as B2B platforms, ecommerce and support for digital strategy so that they can …..

[Kerin]

Nice to meet you @Jessica.Caneschi

I would like to live near the sea too!

Some notes:

> a town in Tuscany (we don’t use ‘the’ for cities or regions)

> I have been working in Sintra FOR 7 years

> I usually do sport 3 timeS a week

👌

[Kerin]

Me too! It is totally my sense of humour!

This is exactly what I wanted you to do. 👍

The last phrase > ME: Sorry Adam, we should do what to her? (with the intonation on ‘what’)

Good Lucia!

[Kerin]

Good work here @Lu_Corde

Here are some suggestions:

4. Instead of Sorry a piece of clarification … better> Sorry, just to clarify …

5. You should use a phrasal verb here: You are using a word that I’m not making out,

7. Can you try and rewrite this?! 😚

8. …. after having picked up Jenny?

[Kerin]

Good sensible strategies @Lu_Corde 👌

[Kerin]

I am very similar to you I believe!

Just one note:

> but the most important requisites to resist (delete:to) boredom are;

ps. You must try Better Things – I think it is pure dead brilliant and I think you’d like it!

[Kerin]

Hi @rubina

Great 👍

A few tweaks to make:

2. Would instead of could

6. cheating ON her (to cheat on someone)

8. spelling > then ✅ Jenny

🤗

[Kerin]

Nice to meet you Francesco!

I like your philosophy (especially points 3 and 5 – I can relate😂)

English is good 👍 In fact 1, delete ‘the’ before Sintra. We don’t use ‘the’ in front of names

> I work for an IT company, sintra digital business, based in Arezzo. ✅

> French and English need a capital letter

> I when used as the pronoun should always have a capital letter too: I’m trying, I don’t like etc

🤗

[Kerin]

That sounds like a pretty awesome weekend @Riccardo.Gai

Good job! 💪

Please see the corrections and just ask if you need clarification

> AT the weekend i usually prefer CYCLING, because it takes more time than a run.

> Instead IN the afternoon, i would stay in, TO relax reading a book, watching Netflix.

[Kerin]

@Cristiana.Starnotti this is good work.

Here you’ll find some suggestions to make things sound more natural:

2. Take away ‘that’ – it’s more fluent: Good morning everyone and sorry I’m late.

3. Replace Excuse me with – sorry about that

I just saw that I muted some of you accidentally. Sorry about that, now everyone can hear you.

4. Word order: Sally, I can only see your browser window.

👍

[Kerin]

@Mattia.Rosi this is good.

I have a question: do Sintra create digital products for all kinds of companies? Or only companies that do e-commerce?

[Kerin]

Well written @Cristiana.Starnotti

Please see my corrections below. If you need anything clarified, please don’t hesitate to ask me.

[Kerin]

Good job @Annalisa 🤗

Here are the corrections. Please ask me if you need anything clarified

[Kerin]

Ok @Lu_Corde , let’s see:

In your original sentence you wrote:

> Sorry, how much sales increase we need?

you are simply missing the auxiliary verb: Sorry, how much sales increase DO we need?

In the corrected sentence you are almost there, you are just missing the preposition which you could place here

> Sorry, how much do we need to increase sales BY?

or here

> Sorry, BY how much do we need to increase sales?

Lastly, you could simply say: Sorry, how much?

🙂

[Kerin]

Oh man! I can imagine it was pretty embarrassing, but good for you for taking a stand!