Forum Replies Created
-
Nice work @Manuela.Lelli
There are a few tweaks to make:
no.3 What you’ve written isn’t grammatically wrong. However, we would tend to just use the past simple in this situation: Sorry, I didnβt catch what you said
no.4 you are missing an ‘it’ – can you try and figure out where it should go?
no.6 perfect!
no.7 Similar to no.3. It sounds more natural to use the pst simple. Can you rewrite using past simple?
Thanks! βΊ
-
@davide π nice sentence!
To make it even stronger, you could also add the problem your company solves or the goal your clients want to reach:
Sintra Consulting srl creates and sells digital solutions with the purpose to lead customers through their digital transformation so that they can ….
-
Hi @Gianni.Bianchi this is good: clear and concise π
A tweak to make:
Sintra β Digital Business offers digital transformation services for companies SUCH AS B2B platformS, ecommerce and support for digital strategy
To make it even stronger, you could also add the problem your company solves or the goal your clients want to reach: Sintra β Digital Business offers digital transformation services for companies such as B2B platforms, ecommerce and support for digital strategy so that they can …..
-
Nice to meet you @Jessica.Caneschi
I would like to live near the sea too!
Some notes:
> a town in Tuscany (we don’t use ‘the’ for cities or regions)
> I have been working in Sintra FOR 7 years
> I usually do sport 3 timeS a week
π
-
Me too! It is totally my sense of humour!
This is exactly what I wanted you to do. π
The last phrase > ME: Sorry Adam, we should do what to her? (with the intonation on ‘what’)
Good Lucia!
-
Good work here @Lu_Corde
Here are some suggestions:
4. Instead of Sorry a piece of clarification … better> Sorry, just to clarify …
5. You should use a phrasal verb here: You are using a word that Iβm not making out,
7. Can you try and rewrite this?! π
8. …. after having picked up Jenny?
-
I am very similar to you I believe!
Just one note:
> but the most important requisites to resist (delete:to) boredom are;
ps. You must try Better Things – I think it is pure dead brilliant and I think you’d like it!
-
Hi @rubina
Great π
A few tweaks to make:
2. Would instead of could
6. cheating ON her (to cheat on someone)
8. spelling > then β Jenny
π€
-
Nice to meet you Francesco!
I like your philosophy (especially points 3 and 5 – I can relateπ)
English is good π In fact 1, delete ‘the’ before Sintra. We don’t use ‘the’ in front of names
> I work for an IT company, sintra digital business, based in Arezzo. β
> French and English need a capital letter
> I when used as the pronoun should always have a capital letter too: I’m trying, I don’t like etc
π€
-
That sounds like a pretty awesome weekend @Riccardo.Gai
Good job! πͺ
Please see the corrections and just ask if you need clarification
> AT the weekend i usually prefer CYCLING, because it takes more time than a run.
> Instead IN the afternoon, i would stay in, TO relax reading a book, watching Netflix.
-
Ok @Lu_Corde , let’s see:
In your original sentence you wrote:
> Sorry, how much sales increase we need?
you are simply missing the auxiliary verb: Sorry, how much sales increase DO we need?
In the corrected sentence you are almost there, you are just missing the preposition which you could place here
> Sorry, how much do we need to increase sales BY?
or here
> Sorry, BY how much do we need to increase sales?
Lastly, you could simply say: Sorry, how much?
π
-
Oh man! I can imagine it was pretty embarrassing, but good for you for taking a stand!