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A jammy day
Two weeks ago I went to the beach with a friend of mine. He said me “Do you fancy a cheeky tour by boat?”. I was so chuffed for this idea and I said “Yes, of course!”
We took a bloody beautiful tour by boat around the coast in the early evening. We paid 50 pound for the tour and also a tenner for grub. Grab was bollocks but the tour was the bee’s kneens.
During the tour was possible to swam. I don’t like to swim in the deep sea, anyroad I did it!
My friend take the piss of me about my fear of high seas and thus I jumped quickly on the sea but with my bloody expansive eyeglasses. When I realized it, I threw instinctively the glasses on the boat. I was so jummy because the glasses finished directly on the hand of friend of mine! He said “ Alright?” I said “Well, ta. This swim is the dog’s bollocks of my life”.
After few minutes a dolphin went by me and my friend not seen him. He said me “You are pissed. It’s not true!”. Sometime he is absolutely cheeky but I was so chuffed for this experience that I said “You are two sandwiches short of a pic nic, you need my eyeglasses”.
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Morning @MariLu
This is ‘bloody’ brilliant! I’m not joking, I’m over the moon to see how much progress you are making! This could almost be from a mother tongue! I hope you enjoyed writing it.
Below you’ll find the tweaks you need to need to make.
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say to someone v. tell someone
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/say-or-tell
In the last paragraph, can you fix the error that I circled?
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Two weeks ago I went to the beach with a friend of mine. He said to me “Do you fancy a cheeky tour by boat?”. I was so chuffed about this idea and I said “Yes, of course!”
We took a bloody beautiful tour by boat around the coast in the early evening. We paid 50 pound for the tour and also a tenner for grub. Grub was bollocks but the tour was the bee’s kneens.
During the tour it was possible to swim. I don’t like to swim in high seas, anyroad I did it!
My friend took the piss out of me about my fear of high sea and so I jumped quickly on the sea but with my bloody expensive eyeglasses. When I realized it, I threw instinctively the glasses on the boat. I was so jammy because the glasses finished directly in the hand of my friend! He said “ Alright?” I said “Well, ta. This swim is the dog’s bollocks of my life”.
After a few minutes a dolphin went by me and my friend didn’t see him. He said to me “You are pissed. It’s not true!”. Sometimes he is absolutely cheeky but I was so chuffed about this experience that I said “You are two sandwiches short of a pic nic, you need my eyeglasses”.
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Thanks Kerin for your review. I’ve corrected my writing.
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Perfect! 👏
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